Tuesday, February 12, 2008

I Hate That Girl Comments

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This is my first poem. I really liked this girl, but the things she's done have poisoned my mind and made me write this.

Beneath the mask of an angelic girl,
Lives the evil hearted veiled troll,
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Aaron Richard
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Tyease Collins 03 July 2008

Ahh man the emotion in this poem...I love the hate like seriously...such powerful words...i like your style of writing...10/10 -Tyease

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Evaughn Gray 23 February 2008

wow that was powerful and strong..hate i love the word, you can describe it through alot of things.great poem.~hazel.

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N Aga Shashidhar Pisapati 12 February 2008

The poems' really coool. u have a gud taste in using the words. but... i suggest u 2 write poems on other stuff

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Dzekashu MacViban 12 February 2008

A good poem laden with emotion and individuality, which shows us that things are not always the way we see 'em.

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