I hate that you fooled me
With your infectios smile
I hate that you told me you loved me
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İ like rhyme and i love words.you used them soo good...Such a beautiful poem. Keep on writing :)
WOW! This poem is wonderful! ...and it has very touching words! I LOVED IT! ! Keep writing greater poems! !
Elizabeth, That's a lot of HATE! To me...hate takes up way too much of my energy...conversely LOVE empowers me. I hope this was not the guy you danced with in your other poem. Ray
another great poem again one that sounds as if you knew me and you knew what i have been through i cant say to much more because i have a lot to do but keep on writing
you have to earn trust as well as learn it-also hate the prson who made you feel those things not yourself, feeling is innocence, once you lose that you might as well be dead.
what an organized poem.Nice one