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Gr8 work.....love in the disguise of hate a whole 10 for this masterpiece

WE ARE RIGHT AROUND THE SAME AGE IM 16 AND I MUST SAY THIS POEM LOOKS AS IF A GROWN WOMAN WROTE IT OUTSTANDING POETRY I'M STARTING TO GET JEALOUS (LOL)

Unrequited love, adolescent angst! This brings back distant memories for me and is very expressively written! Many thanks, Amy. Is English Lit. your favourite subject?

A nice poem on love. Nice form.10+

very very good....really skilled for being only 15(i hate when people said that to me at 15 but I guess its my turn to be patronizing now at 23 haha) ! I think your going to have a great future in writing.

a sweet way of telling how one loses out oneself in love! beautiful piece, Amy...good style and rhythm in the write...for your age your imaginative talent is really admirable...10+

Good stuff, Amy - relentless pace & keeps the reader on the edge of the seat. Keep it up!

That's such a good poem :) You're good at writing rhyme for your age. Keep going - the sky is limitless (so i was once told! !) x