Wednesday, July 25, 2018

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my days are long and lonely
my nights are dark and heavy
my weeks are unhappy
my months are just months
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Sharron Stephenson
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Carl Roussell 26 July 2018

Hatred is such a heavy burden to bear; it can become such a blinding emotion. You have conveyed the feeling well. A 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 25 July 2018

This is a beautiful poem on hatred having touching expression and nice collocation. Some impressive lines are...... my heart is destoryed my soul is black life i wish i could change my wish that life would go away and leave me alone Thanks for sharing.

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