Monday, January 31, 2011

I Hate. Comments

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I hate the way you lie
that fake smile on your face
I hate the fact
that at any second
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Raina Barnett
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 31 January 2011

Beautiful poem. You have made your stand quite clear that you hate everything that is based on falsehood. Wise assessment of the whole situation. Nice write. If time permits please read my poem 'I am not a pendulum' on p.2.

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