Monday, July 4, 2011

I Had Wanted A Pen... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I had wanted a pen
And something lined to scribble on
I had felt my fingers reach out for a book
My aching head and nervous chattering teeth wanted something hard
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Lillian P.k
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 July 2011

Nice poem written with great skill and wisdom. The poem is rich in imagery. Well done. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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