Tuesday, July 1, 2008

I Had To Take It There. Comments

Rating: 2.8

Pawned all of the life I had
And now these hands are bare.
Just a heart I had left- So,
I had to take it there.
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Kyle Shield Laster
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Tia Maria 13 July 2008

Unbelievably clever - you write so well, I can't take it anymore! I will read the next 22 later :)

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Rebekah Gamble 01 July 2008

I like this, it's simple and has a touch of grace, but is powerful and feels almost dirty at the same time. Really nice.

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Kyle Shield Laster

Kyle Shield Laster

Clarksdale, Mississippi
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