Sunday, November 18, 2012

I Had To Chose... Comments

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i thought the best part is when i got married to you
as we're about to become three my dream will come true
i'll have this child who is a part from me and you
he will be the key that reminds me how much i love you
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sahar alameddine
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Miss Darkness 22 November 2012

I took ur advice thank u. Asif :))

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Asif Andalib 18 November 2012

Very beautiful poem Sahar. From my point of view in such cases and in rape cases abortion is legal in any religion. I have noticed two typographical mistakes in your wonderful write. It would be gramatically perfect if you write god has given me this sign to choose instead of god has gave me this sign to chose. Keep on writing

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