I Had A Thought On Your Funeral... Comments

this poem almost made me cry. i had to go to quite a few loved ones funerals and i always had that thought in my mind and heart. very good write

Full of tears in my heart, wish to write few words hre, I love this mum God prescribed Love, joy and compassion On your life you inscribed Jealousy, gloom and repression I had a thought on your funeral we had ours world.. where we never know the sacred touch of her...

many times, we see othrs' faults. But the truth is, sometimes, we can see ourselves in others. and as we analyze their life, we are forced to analyze our own. we find that we have the same faults - or worse. An 'eye opener, ' it gives us a second chance at life- to get it right. Second chances are the greatest gifts. thinking on another's funeral motivated you to think on your own. Very thought provoking. Thank you.

Great piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

thats a good food for thought......... avoid complex words like aggrandizement use a simple synonym of it instead. good work....... a reminder to all mortal souls.

Time sometimes seems to fly as a super jet or as slow as a butterfly but nevertheless, it does fly without one realizing that what one did yesterday is now bouncing back in the mind just as old memories torturing one's present! One had a break and failed but a little time is left to repent before going back to the Supreme Judge! A very deep and thought provoking write that really touch the reader! Love it! 10+++ Keep it up my friend! Romeo from New York City! Thanks for sharing!

Well written and you portrayed a life here very wonderfully.. Nice work..

Very improvised and thought evoking write..Eighty years nowadays is long time a person renders life away from the verges of death no matter rich or poor...