Thursday, November 28, 2013

I Had A Little Pebble Comments

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I had a little pebble,
Its surface smooth and warm;
I put it in my pocket
To keep it safe from harm.
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Fiona Pimentel
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Bri Edwards 30 November 2013

i sent this to MyPoemList for the charm and cleverness of the storytelling, and for the rhymes. and because i could understand it. or did it have hidden meanings? ? ? ? though i don't care much for love poems, i especially loved the following lines: I loved my little pebble, Hoped it would love me too; But when it went, I understood That this could not be true. ...................................thanks for sharing. ALWAYS glue important things down. :)

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Fiona Pimentel

Fiona Pimentel

Cuckfield, W. Sussex, UK
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