Thursday, February 27, 2014

I Had A Dream Of Paradise Comments

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I had a dream Of paradise,
Where voices sailed upon the wind.
Where huge black ravens flew in the skies,
And my ailing body was on the mend.
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Juan Olivarez
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Pradip Chattopadhyay 28 February 2014

the dream you live in, your Mojave, is richer than paradise.

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Valsa George 28 February 2014

What a wonderful dream of Paradise though my dream of it is totally different from yours! I got fascinated by your biography... a proud father of six children.... a loving companion who believes that his wife is the greatest asset and a man in love with the rustic life! Really enjoyed your poem!

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Smoky Hoss 27 February 2014

Oh yes, I know, I understand. Wonderful words my friend.

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