I had a dream Of paradise,
Where voices sailed upon the wind.
Where huge black ravens flew in the skies,
And my ailing body was on the mend.
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What a wonderful dream of Paradise though my dream of it is totally different from yours! I got fascinated by your biography... a proud father of six children.... a loving companion who believes that his wife is the greatest asset and a man in love with the rustic life! Really enjoyed your poem!
the dream you live in, your Mojave, is richer than paradise.