Thursday, July 30, 2009

I Had A Dream........ Comments

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I had a dream
It was unusual
Reminded of my duties
And responsibilities
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Neeharika Sharma
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Lost Poet 01 November 2009

really gr8 work dear....... keep it up...

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Gulshan Mehra 13 August 2009

Nice Idea Niharika..very well written and of course the message it delivers to people is the most interesting part to me..Keep it up great job

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Afzal Shauq 12 August 2009

It was like a spontaneous idea A wish granted from a “ginnie” Ohhh! ! ! I saw myself “dead” But It was wonderful and not tragic As instead of going to heaven I came back on earth good poem with rich and sweet idea, flow is perfect... good flow and above all it thoughtful and meaningful too... really a good poem..liked it and I saw your few more poems too..quite impressive most of them.. well done...10/10

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Deborah Cromer 30 July 2009

Written with wisdom and experience of the heart. There is a strong message in your words. This is from the soul and processed through the mind. A peice of work full of love and encouragement. Nicely done. Deborah Cromer

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