*** I Got The Blues For You *** Comments

this one of my faves! ! ! ! u laid out deetails 4 the reader to picture it! ! ! this is awesome

Ouch! ! ! ! ! ! Fantastic Sulaiman, you are on a roll, this poem is filled with fire, burning within the soul.

vry well written.you deserve a definite 10++++

Please, for simplicity, keep your words in C, G, F or B flat..... George

Musician to musician, music to my ears. I also like playing words, as you do. George

YES, SIREE, YOU ARE THE TOP OF THE HAYSTACK! ! ! WHO CAN COMPARE? THE EIFFEL TOWER, THE EMPIRE STATE BUILDING IN SO FAR AS REACHING TOWARD THE SKY? YOU'RE ALREADY IN THE CLOUDS, FILTERING ABOVE OUR LIVES, LIFTING OUR SPIRITS AND, YES, MAKING US CRY WITH ADORATION AND, YES, ENVY. WE ALL WANT TO BE LOVED AND CHERISHED AND YOU WRITE THE SONGS, SPOUT THE PASSION, CAUSE US TO DREAM AND EXAMINE OURSELVES. LOTS OF FIDGETY PEOPLE OUT THERE NOW BECAUSE OF YOUR SURREAL ABILITY TO LIGHT OUR FIRES, SO TO SPEAK. NOT ONLY SHOULD YOU PUBLISH YOUR WORKS, BUT, YES, YOU SHOULD INCLUDE A CD WITH YOU SINGING AND PLAYING AN INSTRUMENT. MORE PEOPLE WILL TAKE UP DANCING AS WELL AS ROMANCING, I'D GUESS. NICE COMBO. YOU SINGING AND DANCING, I MEAN. ENJOY. THANK YOU, CAROL

That's brilliant, very evocative, and it seems to me, angry! Deb Kean

hmmm hmm hmm **snap my fingers** GOod Stuff!

wow! I'm really impress with your style in writing poems..... (just like this poem) i wish i can be able to write a poem like that..... great job....keep on writing......

I have really become influenced by your style in writing.

Such an great way written, amazing, wish i can write like that it's just...WOW beautiful

The poem was absolutely beautiful, full of flow. And the musical touch added to the tone in such a significant way. Keep up the excellent work.

well it seems so blue from over here nicely expressed

very interesting read, great flow and feel, A1

Wow this is extreamly good. I got a little lost in the words themselves, but it carried me away for a moment. I applaud you. -Brgr

Wow, this it's extremely great. Your really good at this, I love who you mixed music with poetry. Interesting style I must say, I love it.

A very nice piece of work infused with the secret codes of music; keep it up and let us learn from you always.Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.

A nice piece...have love to read it....i like the rythm in the poem.....if u wish u can be a critic for my pieces......

New and engaging. Danceable. Yes, please critique my pieces.

Wooowww, , , i love it! Like a poem with music, even I can't hear it, But it surrounded the tone, , Hehehe, , well done Brett, , Love it much! Naru Kaede, , ,