I Got No Right On A Poetry Site Comments

My friend write what you feel, as you feel it....in whatever manner you chose....as poetry in fact is 'the window to the soul.' Excellent composition!

Put on some Bob Dylan or Tom Waits....save the gas...you just write from the heart and the gut.

i enjoyed it fully which brings out the confusion and uncertainty of a writer at some stage or other...but dont feel diffident with all your nice poems including this...love prasanna

Here! here! we all need time and space to grow and develope as poets, a strong write Love duncan X

Hey! This is a good write, very well expressed and says what a lot of us feel. thanks for being our spokeswoman. Keep at it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

this is how I feel a lot of the time...and the other half I just don't care because no one really understands my poems anyway. ;) thanks for commenting! ! -landrey

Vallerie, don't let despair choose your words unless its what you're writing about! You could have re-titled this verse 'I've got this Site on Poetry right...' and not only been right, but rather forthright. Practise makes poetry perfect, lots. Poetry is hidden within the poet and moves into the poet's words - if you keep them simple without too much structure. Eg: rhyme, rhythm and metre are the poet’s meat and drink but some let structure defeat the expression of simple words. Keep on writing. Ivan

yes you do have a right and a very very great right(write) ..it flows very well with direct imagery and tells a story so very good, , , , blessings....Cecil

You've got EVERY right on this poetry site, Valerie, and you're doing fine as you are....I don't know what those things are either, ha ha. Great poem.. Love, Fran xx

Vallerie, I think a lot of us can relate to this, I know my dictionary gets plenty of use. There's no doubt in my mind that you belong... well done! ! Brian

been there girl......i hear yah well...English isn't my first tongue- its Filipino. I had my shares of doubts too about constructions...but i stick to one thing....of what my little heart feels and wishes to share. You're on the sam page. I hear your heart well. Take care. reinalie