Thursday, March 22, 2018

I Go On Forever... Comments

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Life goes tough, roads seem rough,
I went, I go, I go on forever....

The boats sails, the idea fails,
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Naila Rais
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Prabir Gayen 02 April 2019

Very beautiful poem....awesome..... thanks

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 February 2019

you read so many of my poems today but did not comment ON any O what a dismay NR

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Naila Rais 17 February 2019

Nothing.....What I can write for it....

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 January 2019

When troubles fear, came a lovely dear, I laughed, I laugh, I laugh on forever.... tears, sorrow, laughter. meditating on the end.........very emotional. very effective...... thank u dear poetess. tony

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Adiela Akoo 28 November 2018

Very creative approach

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 September 2018

you seemingly have some unique creativity about you you go go on for ever all will know who you are for ever and ever beware this world is a dangerous place trust no one no disappointment will ever you trace live life with grace at home place sweetest place rouges abound love resound and then it becomes a fall from grace keep safe

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Naila Rais 26 September 2018

Kkkkkk Naila......

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Aniruddha Pathak 21 September 2018

Thoughts that struck, interesting and a novel approach

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Rajnish Manga 09 September 2018

Sweet and interesting with awesome rhyming. When failures are subdued by the hopes for future. Loved reading this poem.

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Cleveland W. Gibson 06 September 2018

Good. Now what about taking a look at each first line of each verse. Join them together as a poem and 'something' happens. Try it.

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Naila Rais 06 September 2018

Kkk, , thnx

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Benjamin Uy 05 September 2018

Yes i like your poem very much, Keep creating this genre, Respectfully yours benjamin chiu uy

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Naila Rais 06 September 2018

So much thanks for taking a pause.... Naila

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Tariq Al 14 July 2018

Emotional and reflective of the things you've been persevering with: Thanks for the insight, Naila.

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Naila Rais 05 September 2018

Thank u......... ....

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Riza Braholli 06 June 2018

Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Beautiful poem Naila, so fine. And you can read my poems. Riza

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Naila Rais 01 July 2018

Thnk u so much sir for your kind words... It's my pleasure to read..

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 May 2018

Love and life! ! Roads seem rough! ! ! ! ! ! ! Only believe in the truth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Joann Hill 29 April 2018

You should check it out. INFJ’s are often considered sad souls. We see beyond what others see.

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Naila Rais 29 April 2018

Oh, really... Thanks for appreciation.... Stay happy... Naila

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Joann Hill 29 April 2018

Lovely poem... have you taken a personality test I believe you may be an INFJ like me....

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Tamara Turner 29 April 2018

Wow very deep and reflective.

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Naila Rais 29 April 2018

Thanx so much for reading it.... Stay blessed.. Naila

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Hannah Williams 23 April 2018

I really enjoyed this!

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Naila Rais 23 April 2018

Thanks so much for enjoying it..... It really motivated me..... Naila

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Banamala Sen 08 April 2018

Lovely expression of your thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

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Naila Rais 08 April 2018

Thanks.... Appreciation goes on boosting.... Naila

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 01 April 2018

You have got a good start with sad poems, from so tender an age. We generally hope our kids to be happy and healthy with dreams and desires. Wish some of the blissful moment come by you too.

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Naila Rais 01 April 2018

Thanks.... May your dreams come true..... Naila

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Savita Tyagi 31 March 2018

Beautiful write! Loved the flow and thought process. Thank you dear Naila for sharing. Best wishes.

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Naila Rais 31 March 2018

Thanks so much for your kind hearted words.. Naila

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Naila Rais 25 March 2018

Thanx all of you for your response... Naila 😃😃😃

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