I Go On Forever... Comments

Very beautiful poem....awesome..... thanks

you read so many of my poems today but did not comment ON any O what a dismay NR

When troubles fear, came a lovely dear, I laughed, I laugh, I laugh on forever.... tears, sorrow, laughter. meditating on the end.........very emotional. very effective...... thank u dear poetess. tony

Very creative approach

you seemingly have some unique creativity about you you go go on for ever all will know who you are for ever and ever beware this world is a dangerous place trust no one no disappointment will ever you trace live life with grace at home place sweetest place rouges abound love resound and then it becomes a fall from grace keep safe

Thoughts that struck, interesting and a novel approach

Sweet and interesting with awesome rhyming. When failures are subdued by the hopes for future. Loved reading this poem.

Good. Now what about taking a look at each first line of each verse. Join them together as a poem and 'something' happens. Try it.

Yes i like your poem very much, Keep creating this genre, Respectfully yours benjamin chiu uy

Emotional and reflective of the things you've been persevering with: Thanks for the insight, Naila.

Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Beautiful poem Naila, so fine. And you can read my poems. Riza

Love and life! ! Roads seem rough! ! ! ! ! ! ! Only believe in the truth! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

You should check it out. INFJ’s are often considered sad souls. We see beyond what others see.

Lovely poem... have you taken a personality test I believe you may be an INFJ like me....

Wow very deep and reflective.

I really enjoyed this!

Lovely expression of your thoughts. Thanks for sharing.

You have got a good start with sad poems, from so tender an age. We generally hope our kids to be happy and healthy with dreams and desires. Wish some of the blissful moment come by you too.

Beautiful write! Loved the flow and thought process. Thank you dear Naila for sharing. Best wishes.

Thanx all of you for your response... Naila 😃😃😃