Wednesday, August 28, 2013

I Glory In Thee, Lord! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Who says nothing in life is fair?
He is asleep - deep in a dream;
For how could he be so unaware
people thrive down the river
...
Read full text

Nicanor P. Tiosen
COMMENTS
Bernard F. Asuncion 10 January 2019

An outstanding spiritual poem..............10+++++++++

0 0 Reply
Vivian Nguyen 28 August 2013

When you write about God, you should use the correct grammar for God, with always having His 'h' capitalized. You've used His 'h' for 'His', but not for 'He' yet.

2 0 Reply
Nicanor P. Tiosen

Nicanor P. Tiosen

La Paz, Leyte, Philippines
Close
Error Success