Who says nothing in life is fair?
He is asleep - deep in a dream;
For how could he be so unaware
people thrive down the river
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When you write about God, you should use the correct grammar for God, with always having His 'h' capitalized. You've used His 'h' for 'His', but not for 'He' yet.
An outstanding spiritual poem..............10+++++++++