Monday, August 22, 2011
I Give You This Comments
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There as searing beauty in the air
You breath. The is viscous tartar
In the teeth I leave.
No one can be wiser than the
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Stan Petrovich
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Adeline Foster
22 August 2011
No one can be wiser than the Man who has worn it all Close to his chest. This is a great line containing both metaphor, hyperbole and wisdom. Note please, no comma after ‘all’. The second line: could you mean? Your breath. There is viscous tarter Adeline
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8/2/2025 4:38:51 AM # 1.0.0
Perfect 10 SG.............poetic licence don't worry about commas..who needs their writing constricted by such things!