I Give Up! ! ! Comments
I try to breathe but end up in deep sighs
I try to point out but ignore like the blind eyes
I try to unleash but get tangled in unbreakable chain
I try to endure but get stabbed with excruciating pain
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I try to solve but get fed up with fruitless toil I try to escape but get caught in endless turmoil I try to ease, I try to cure I try to ignore, I try to endure I try every way and then…I give up! ! ! Beautiful line.. caught in endless turmoil. Thanks for it.10 for the poem.
I always get one for you but you look for the other I move to erase the distance but you ran further I hope to explain you but you challenge my dignity I approach to hear you but you pose your insanity I think of rebelling but then…I give up! ! love this beautiful stanza. good poem.
congratulations, dear KC! ;) a friendly hug from Tuscany! :)
Thank you Dr. Fabrizio! Proud to be a part of the Frosini group of poets ;) a warm Namaste from Nepal :)
Freeing poem! Kinda like the poetic version of Frozen. Well done and congrats! :)
Hmm never thought they would make a movie on my poem: -p Thank you Pam. You have been really inspiring :)
Very nice poem! Congrats on being poet of the day! Sometimes plain surrender is the best thing to do!
Lovely poem. These conflicting emotions and trying to reconcile.......expressed so well. This is what we are. Congratulations for the member poem place.
Nice to read this poem once again, and congratulations for having it chosen as poem of the day! Well done!
I could feel great emotion in these words. Interesting you do not remember writing this. Thank You
I do remember writing this, just can't figure out the plot that inspired me to make some twists. I know it's strange! Thank you Lyn :)
First of all hearty congratulation.....member poet.....my friend. ...beautifully written...[[[ in the form of CONTRAST...]]]......two parts of our minff or two individuals. .....entertaining...........aesthetically sublime......... I REQUEST YOU AND ALL THE VISITORS TO READ MY POEM. ...# YOU AND I OR A NON-RHYMED SONNET TO US.....#........I THINK YOU GET THE SAME IDEA AND WHICH I WROTE LAST YEAR........IT MAY BE A CO-INCIDENT.... I HUMBLY REQUEST ALL......THANKS.
A good motivational verses. Congratulations for being the Poem Of The Day.
A very amusing poem and letting go is freedom! Congrats on Poem of the Day Tom Billsborough
Feel as if its my story, for what ever it is. Although I am not negative minded, too often I have felt this way. Lines too are very much with my thinking. Congrats for being the poem of the day. X
If only me i could make it be world song but I give up because im not myself
Never to give up. Life's purpose is to fight and find out the solution. Nice write though.
I get you when you say we should fight forever yet sometimes giving up is not weakness, it's wise sometimes. Thank you :)
With our humbleness we may try to satisfy someone's ego, be it for love or peace.When all our efforts go vain, we stop trying.The last line has much wisdom in it.A beautiful poem Shreej K.C.Congratulations for being poet of the Day.
Try again and, never give up! ! Life is full of problems. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Edward. You are right- Never give up unless it's the only wise thing to do :)
Sometimes you just have to cut your losses. Congrats on poem of day, Shreej
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7/19/2025 9:25:52 PM # 1.0.0
a lovely piece really. no hesitation....
Thank you Akachukwu :)