I Give Up Comments

wow touching poem really really nice

That is beautiful.. It reminds me a lot of my poems tones..

you know whats kool? as i read the last line in your poem, a song came into my head and the line that came to mind was, 'what a friend we have in Jesus.' i know you may not believe in Him or have even heard of Him. but itll be ok. whatever hard times youre going through, itll be ok. this might sound really weird coming from a complete stranger, but if you need someone to listen or to talk to, im here for you. it sounds weird, i know, but its true. im here for you. hope is never lost.