I Give Our Self This Chance... Comments

yes there is happiness til the end of time

awhhhhh cho cheeeeeeeewt my lil princess so nice to see you in love again-- Shayne you lucky guy haaaaaan keep my princess happy love u dear A+++ anjali

i love this poem really makes you think 10!

Go ahead, hataw, fall in love; if you fall, you'll get up again, and fall again in love; it is a never-ending battle of rise and fall, the better part is the fall. And your write says it all, so lovingly.

a very beautiful write indeed with lots of yearns....thanks 10 rgds asif

Give him a chance. May Shayne lives in yer heart forever, Well done Hataw.

beautifully written. fanastic job. kinda sad, but good.

nice poem and message to your soul mate..poignant and written deep in you heart..lovely...A10 Ency Bearis

well what a lucky guy Hataw, always wonderful falling in love... Andy 10

:) good. It appears you have found happiness. Interesting how poets can put emotions felt by so many so perfectly and simply. A good read, this is one of your better poems, and that is saying something...

it is good to feel like that way he will tell u that he will prove love 4 u. he will share ut love, , , .. that time between lover it is important...this chance, , , between lovers.., , nice poem it is touching my heart.... good poem and great work it is art