Thursday, November 22, 2007

I Get Wet Because Im Dry Comments

Rating: 5.0

It’s cold and dark everywhere
The clouds kissed the mountains near
The hungry rivers are shouting and swelling
Help! The grassland is drowning
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Ayi Escalona
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Faith Serencko 15 January 2009

Thank you very much for your comment. I really like this poem..its just so beautiful.

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Ewigi Liebe 27 December 2007

Im having enough time reading all your poem and its fantastically well done.

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Jeannie Ann Clark 16 December 2007

Thank you for your comment on my poem. This poem is very nice and I enjoyed it. Jeannie-10

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Jemarie Ragudo 13 December 2007

You get a 10 for vivid images and good use of figures of speech.

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Linda Weischedel 04 December 2007

LOVE IT You got a 10 from me! Always, Linda

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Melvin Banggollay 27 November 2007

alovely poem indeed with deep meaning and message everyone must learn. thanks melvin

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Subbaraman N V 22 November 2007

A lovely poem which I enjoyed thoroughly! Congratulations for sharing!

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