I gave you a rose and you laughed
I didn't get angry
But I felt disappointment and wept
For I loved you on an eternity
And that has melted into a soup,
In which, you did not enjoyed
It was bittersweet
And I laugh with spite
Now, yr guilt has poisoned you
Because yr partner left
And you were left to face life alone
Time says the truth but waits... a nice composition... congrats for the poem being selected for TNP!
Sometimes fate takes its own course and its wind favors us. A touching and well expressed poem.
that creton didn't deserve a rose, , , unless it was a dead one! way to give him the boot!
Dear LeeAnn, I like the honesty in all your poems. What you really feel, you write. Amazing poem dear.....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A choice that turned out to be wrong....Nice poetic expression 5****