I gave myself freedom from boredom
From the leaves in the garden
To old toys in the garage
I had always been in one touch
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Work without love is slavery these words bring to mind what the lebanese poet Kahlil Gibran said about work, saying if you whhere unable to work with love it would be wiser to live of charity, cause if a baker bakes a bread hating what he does his hatred will poison the bread. Andsoon. Stating that the intention and the energy you put into something matters cause it will be noticed and felt. May angels continue to inspire you Boomwhisperer Ruerd
very beautiful write indeed Sir with very powerful message...thanks for sharing 10+++ rgds asif
Excellent and very true poem...i like mentioning the artists like 'Picasso'...really fantastic! ! ..., and i agree with you that it's very important to enjoy your art and know yourself deeply and discover your talents..... don't deprive us from your talent..10
'spread love and justice' it's all we need... nice words.
I like this poem, too.There are many lines of truth and wisdom in th creative poem: 'Self taught peolple think outside the box' and are more creative-make sense. when one don't think one does not create.'Never change what you're good at; repetition is reputation'-a fresh perception! 'Work without love is slavery' another great line! this poem rates a 10
again the truth about ourselves most remain.Faithfull to our souls, not always easy but always ours
A beautiful, deep and philosophical poem well penned.10
Very philosophical poem Ahmad. To think outside the box is to be creative and your poem has much wisdom. Well done! 10 love Karin
Some kind advice in your poem........I try to think outside the box myself.. Ruthy: -)
A lovely warm feel to this tribute poem - - a tribute to self-worth - and as you rightly say 'work without love is slavery ' - - a good piece of food for thought Ahmad..... best wishes from Fay.
you are unique my friend....that; s why we all love you....i see that you made a great effort to compose this wonderful piece of poetry....thanks for sharing my friend....u know many great poets hide their poems and reveal them for the people who spend money only..i thank you for leaving your poems free to be read..
Yes self-esteem is essential for creation. Study by ourselves is the best study and we need not be distracted by studying others' works. More knowledge always is hindrance to creation and self-expression. Self-expression is natural, intuitive and natural. Nice verse.
I too think it is important to enjoy your art for what it is. Thank you for putting that so simply and clearly. Not so sure about changing it.