Saturday, October 24, 2015

I Gave My Sister The Moon Comments

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I roll the red, rounded object in my hand
And give it to my sister
She pulls off the red wax and reveals the milky white cake underneath
I draw the dark blue curtains sprinkled with gold stars
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Cherie Mort
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Leah Ross 11 April 2016

Very well written love it

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 November 2015

As we lie down on the grass and look upon the heavens We admire the celestial ornaments created with our gifts My sister gave me the world And I gave my sister the moon, .. very good poem. togetherness when we share eachother the little joys of life in love, that matters a lot. thank you dear Poetess. tony

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