Saturday, October 14, 2006

I Gave Her A Flower. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I gave her a flower, a cute little pretty thing
picked from the edge of the path where we strolled
yellow and blue she accepted it sweetly
and said 'I will treasure this till I am old'
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Charles M Moore
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Mary Nagy 07 January 2007

What a beautiful poem! The mention of poemhunter names of course is VERY sweet but honestly, the way you describe this conversation is wonderful. I felt like I could almost hear that acorn hitting the water. Very lovely poem. Sincerely, Mary

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Esther Leclerc 22 December 2006

Charlie... I am sorry for missing this when first posted, and not just for the mention (thank you) ... A sweet slice o' life here, a bit poignant as well (her needing support) . Yes, very gentle and warm! Esther : ]

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Amanda Lukas 14 October 2006

A sweet poem. Calming and sensitive. I hope you keep your flower forever!

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John Tiong Chunghoo 14 October 2006

i love the gentleness of this poem. reminds me of clare.

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Patricia Gale 14 October 2006

Beautiful Charles. You can tell you have placed part of yourself within this write. I know I will treasure the flower of your golden work until I am old, as the flower you speak of in this piece.Well done.

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

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