I Gave Away The Sun Comments

Waoh Rebekah, this is some deep poetry here, true reflection into the concep of religion. Higly impressed with your poetics.

Wow...intense...as a poem I love it for the 'snapshot' of a moment of epiphany...if it is true, how sad that you couldn't reconcile your differences...sometimes(again not relevant to the power of your poem) I think that is what is wrong with religion, that it divides us rather than unite us...but great writing...Coach

this is really wellrafted poem as Yoonoos writes. ireally liked the way you have created the mood and tone of the poem