Wednesday, October 5, 2016

I Free You Comments

Rating: 5.0

O' my beloved.......,
Each day, the ocean growing deep,
By every new drop of love I seek,
My Heart craves for none, but you,
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Jaya Das
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Chinedu Dike 16 January 2017

Beautiful depiction of love as mighty spiritual experience that affects one profoundly - a voyage of bliss. I concur with your conviction that a lover mustn't be possessive while deeply in love. An insightful poem written from inner recesses of the heart. Thanks for sharing Das.

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Siddartha Montik 27 November 2016

I found no footprints heading towards my abode, You walked on some other path......, But my beloved, I shall sit forever on my way, With just a hope, you may turn back someday... nice verses.. Sincere Love and Sacrifice! it wins sure! ! thank you for sharing Jaya Das! 10+++

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Zwelethu Siwaphiwe Shweni 01 November 2016

Wow I loved it. I heart filled with love, seeking one's to swim into it, but when the one is not interested isn't tied by grudges, grieves and not remorse feeling should be attached to the one whose no longer interested to swim in this heart full of love.

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Jaya Das 01 November 2016

True... I am glad that you felt the foremost thought of my poetry....ty so much friend!

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Rajnish Manga 20 October 2016

Though, a loser in the game of love, the protagonist feels that she has no regrets as nobody can own anybody's love and that the love itself is a great healer Thanks for sharing the poem: No agony I have, No grief, My love for you was always true, Though I couldn't get the same from you,

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Jaya Das 22 October 2016

Thank you so much sir

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