Tuesday, August 1, 2006

I Found You Comments

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I found you.
In my heart.
Buried.
Obsolete.
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A.J. McKinley
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Daniel Tyler 21 August 2006

what I'm so impressed by is the variety of your palette. Here you write in a very stripped, minimal way, that is just as effective as your more image-rich pieces. 'I found you. In my arms. Close. Touching. An electric vibe.' This is bare and primal, just as the feelings are, so you are able to make form and rhythm contribute to the ideas of the poem. It's a remarkable gift.

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A.J. McKinley

A.J. McKinley

Indiana, United States
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