Thursday, March 27, 2008

I Found Out Today Comments

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I found out today
the day you went away
the laughters turned into cries
with every last goodbye
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Emma English
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Talia Anziliero 24 September 2008

Nice easy wording for comparisons(sp?) , well versed, made sense. Cudos!

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The Cobra 25 August 2008

That was very good, i really enjoyed the poem even though it was obvious that we're all gonna die

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Mariah Lasley 14 August 2008

Hmm...i like it...very true.

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Bethany Buhl 14 August 2008

I'm afraid of death even through I know it's coming.

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Aashish Ameya 04 July 2008

thats eternal truth u foudn out...good one..

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Chan Jee 07 May 2008

surely departure is some one is very painful.but we have to live.we have to face all this.this is the reality of life.but my friend i am with you.

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Amie-Lee ...... 31 March 2008

I agree, this is a really good poem.

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Kelly Chatfield 27 March 2008

Hello Emma, This poem is good and great. Bye from Kel

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John Tiong Chunghoo 27 March 2008

lovely poem, emma. so sad we all experinece it wherever whoever we are. god is fair.

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Emma English

Emma English

Cairns, Queensland Australia
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