Sunday, August 27, 2006
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What I learned in vivid dreams
What I saw in gold sunbeams
What I felt in streaming rain
What I wove in daisy chains
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Preeti - is here!
27 August 2006
Sophia, this is lovely. The style of this poem is like poems in my mother tongue - hindi. Great work! Preets
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7/19/2025 9:26:00 PM # 1.0.0
Excellent rhyme, very very good. But your meter was off and also you had an extra syllable hangin' out in the 'flute and cello' line, but really good choice of words. -landrey