Tuesday, November 17, 2015

I Found A Home In You Comments

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I have found a perfect place
That I can call my second home;
I've finally made a decision
That I now no longer roam.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Anjandev Roy 11 January 2021

Excellent write..

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Avid Fan 03 May 2019

I have found a perfect place That I can call my second home; I've finally made a decision That I now no longer roam. A well penned poem, sir Bernard.

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Cheryl Tutaan 01 January 2019

So grateful truly I am For the countless words of wisdom; Let me not forget my password, Thank you, poemhunter.com Such a marvelous poem, dear Bernard...................

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Cheryl Tutaan 02 May 2017

Wow! This was so amazing! At the beginning, I think of different things, why it's your second home, then I realized at the end It was really your second home... :) Well written and I like the twist at the end... Truly our second home! Thank you @poemhunter.com and thank you for sharing, Bernard... Perfect 10+++++++

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Thanks, CHE... although there are some bullies, as there's a black sheep in a literal home...

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Soul Watcher 20 May 2016

Well done Bernard, I totally agree with you

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Thanks, Soul Watcher... Your visit means so much to me... I have treasured it for almost a year now...

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Bernard F. Asuncion

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