Sunday, February 24, 2008

I Fought Against The Winds..... Comments

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I fought against the winds and waves
And dallied with the thunder gust
I wandered in the galaxies
And in the earthly dust and rust
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Shujaat Rahi
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Don Mcwilliams 09 March 2008

Very nice, Shujaat. The rhyme scheme holds together without losing strength or seeming forced. Best, Don

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