I For Me Comments

You have penned your emptiness most effectively. Your poem is sad and soulful but beautiful within the melancholy. 10 Karin Anderson

lovely poem asif nicely write asif +10 4 u asif :)

A lovely poem. U get 10++.........

The beauty of pathos shines through this piece from the first stanza onwards - - this gives a strong, dark effect and therefore stays in the mind of the reader..... a good poem and 10 from Fay.

Haunting poetry from you Bhayya. It takes me days to get out of this effect.

sad piece. out of such brokenness flows such vigor. someone, feed this man.. wanna read want he woudl write when he is whole

10 for this beautiful poem.

poignant...the inner strife.. well descirbed