.. I Fly Away..........................(New Version) Comments

I like the way your emotion how is tamed and sensation tracked. Good piece of art of yours.10+++

Wonderful to fly away from that torment. Beautiful expression of feeling.

deep thoughts... expressively written Life is just like that... 10+++ Maia

full of expression with a wonderful flow.....10

Trapped behind closed doors - yes I too would fly with the birds - free....a positive alternative

nice poem, other side of land always seems green but nothing is better than what god has suggested us to live with..... poem flows well.....

Expressive write...thanks...10

fluently written poems gives joys and this poem is fluent and affluent in contents and idea

quite nice i feel the same sometimes

beauiful hun! ! ! thiz iz so advanced for me! ! ! wonderful you do a great job ^_^

you paint pictures really well with your words id appreciate some pointers really good poem

Beautifully written with a vision of what's to come and yet even in the beauty of and peace there is conflict. Well done!

A lovely poem with beautiful imagery, well done Dr Love, 10 Lynda xx

deep and with beautiful imagery

Great observation of life and detail. You paint a vivid picture of what is seen in front of you. Thanks for sharing 10

i like the poem, it's simple but tells a lot about life.

trials makes r life so wonderful....keep it up'''creating a lovely poems.... yani

thats really great. i liked it

Well said and I enjoyed, reading it! 10

unbelievable poem.....10+++