I Flew Comments

It appears that THIS POEM was the last submitted by Naida. I feel it is PH's loss, but...Maybe someone else's gain (I hope) . bri : )

Nice poem. A melancholy write..

Part 3. But if nobody tried boldly, for the first time, man would still be the same barbaric tribe nude and dirty, fighting in the wild for existence with other beasts…

Part 2. But unless you try for the first time, you are never going to make it. It is but natural that you fall once or twice when you start. But we need to. Albeit the fact/truth that if you never try, you never fall (c)

" I flew but fell //I tried but failed " … Nice way to start this brilliant poem. As a "Bird of Flight" it comes to you naturally to fly. It is in your genes. (Contd) ..

A brave soul, a fiercely independent soul.... write your poetry and bravely face the world! Nice write.10+

You flew out a long time back. Please come back now, Naida! :) Jokes apart, this is a simple, nice poem. Thoughts of a sensitive mind well expressed. I visited your beautiful country for twelve days in 2016 and liked every place I visited and people I met.

A nice self asertion and poetic imagination, Naida. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks