Thursday, April 20, 2017

I Find Myself In You Comments

Rating: 4.7

When doubt and fear attack my heart
My world adopts a somber hue,
As the battle rages, I panic,
But then I find my peace in you
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Lora Colon
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Jazib Kamalvi 24 April 2017

I like the line, Please, never unclasp your hand from mine Thanks for sharing..

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Lorraine Colon 24 April 2017

Thank you, Jazib.

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Rajnish Manga 20 April 2017

The presentation reflects an ideal understanding between two lovers. This is indeed a celebration of love for one another. They are there to support and help out each other.Thanks.

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Lorraine Colon 20 April 2017

Thank you Rajnish for your insightful comment.

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Sarah Persson 20 April 2017

This is a beautiful poem Lora, I love the way it flowed so gently, it seamed effortless. Thank you for sharing this. A very well deserved 10

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Lorraine Colon 20 April 2017

Thank you so much. I appreciate your comment.

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