I Find It Difficult To Not Drink In All That Is You. Comments

this is a terrific poem william. it's imagery is amazing! i wish i could write like this.

the madness of love is pretty overwhelming...i want to drink to that too.pretty awsome stuff u got here william.

Sir, I liked ur poem.....the imagery expressed. I think u would like a similar poem 'WE WILL MEET' by me......try it.

Beautiful and poignantly familiar. Well written. I enjoyed it.

A highly romantic piece of your manliness here William, a passion I feel sure, most women would want a man to feel for them....Men are so possessive when it comes to the woman of their desires. You express it well. Smiling at you, Tai

Some real high proof passion, makes moonshine like water.

'You are like the magnificent sun, while I am like a shock of wheat turned golden and bending toward your incandescent radiance.' - that is a unique and perfectly selected simile. I find this an adorable, genuine piece. t x