I Finally Learned My Lesson Comments

I agree with julia.. If you keep the sin inside of you, It would be hard for you to talk to that someone... Keep up the good writing...

I hope you'd find it in your heart to forgive this 'someone'... =)

I felt the anguish of this composition.... Unbearable... unrenewable... The flow of the words supporting one phrase to the other makes it more of a great poem.. Keep writing.. c:

The bitterness and sadness of being betrayed..portrayed wonderfully in this great poem. Nice write! Keep writing!