i finally found forever...
in the laughter of a small child,
in a raindropp rolling down the window.
in a flower that opened and closed
...
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Bravo! So well said Eric. This is a real gem, added to my personal favorites.10 +!
Sir, I too felt beauty and wonder in the lines showing smile in the face of the young boy cuffed, in the eyes engaged moment, talking without words and in giving without thinking, the felt breath, ....Inspired lines like these make the poem elegant.