Thursday, March 12, 2015

I Felt Her Warmth Comments

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I felt her warmth above the ground
It threw the rime, from ridge of ground.
My soul dormant, yet felt her nigh,
I stirred to break the loose sand high.
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Josey Alfred
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Kim Barney 24 March 2015

Yes, much better now that you fixed it.

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Kim Barney 17 March 2015

Interesting fantasy. In the fourth line, who is the HE mentioned? Did you mean I instead of HE?

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Josey Alfred 18 March 2015

Yes it's an error. Thanki you for pointing it.

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