Sunday, June 29, 2014

I Fell To Get Up To Move On Comments

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When I fell...
I coveted the experience.
Oh yes.
And with a doing I did not expect.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Hardik Vaidya 29 June 2014

Exceptional write Lawrence, and the beauty of this poem is in its uncanny nature of being alive. Leaping out from its binary prison, and exploding within our souls, the injection of much needed hydrogen which the core of our star is fast running out of. Thank you for gifting this write.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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