I Fell Into The Sky Comments

A world turned upside down makes me sigh too, and wish it was a dream!

Marvellous recounting of an (imaginary) dream..

Soon I awoke from this strange dream, and sighed a little sigh Recalled the weird and wondrous as I fell into the sky.. love, comfort, nature, beauty, dream. love ur poem. tony

You drew me in with the title! I thoroughly enjoyed

A fun poetic fantasy!

Loved your title, it ropes one into your fantasy. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

Palm trees put on winter coat, Birds decided not to fly Lemons, limes, they all grew sweet The elephants stood on their toes You fell into the sky………. I smiled when I read this poem What a powerful imagination. Was it really a dream or you vivid and poetic imagination. I think it is your great power of imagination. Thank you dear poetess. tony

Pansies and praises! With the muse of life. Nice work.

Your ink is great. So, I love your poem. Thank you so much.

ok, my third (at least) time reading this. THIS TIME immoveable looked funny, so i did a little research. im·mov·a·ble i(m) ˈmo͞ovəb(ə) l/ adjective adjective: immoveable 1. not able to be moved. lock your bike to something immovable like a lamp post synonyms: fixed, secure, stable, moored, anchored, rooted, braced, set firm, set fast; More stuck, jammed, stiff, unbudgable, four-square lock your bike to something immovable motionless, unmoving, immobile, stationary, still, stock-still, not moving a muscle, rooted to the spot; transfixed, paralyzed, frozen there he was, silent and immovable antonyms: mobile, moving, in motion (of a person) not yielding to argument or pressure. synonyms: steadfast, unwavering, unswerving, resolute, determined, firm, unshakable, adamant, unfailing, dogged, tenacious, inflexible, unyielding, unbending, uncompromising, obdurate, obstinate, iron-willed; More informalrock-steady, diehard she was immovable in her loyalties antonyms: fickle, unsure (especially of a principle) fixed or unchangeable. an immovable article of faith Law (of property) consisting of land, buildings, or other permanent items. nounLaw noun: immoveable 1. immovable property. =================== and I WAS GOING TO SAY YOU MISSPELLED THE WORD IN YOUR POEM. BUT NOW I SEE IT IS OK SPELLED WITH 1 OR 2 es. :) bri

I loved reading this again. great rhymes and ‘ideas’, or did you really dream this? now it shall go into my/our June showcase on my PH site. thanks for sharing. bri :)

You have a great imagination.

A wonderfully mixed up world, I would like to visit. Love the line 'Birds decided not to fly and ordered Mini Coopers' I could imagine little birds fitting very nicely behind the wheel of a Cooper. Brought smiles and laughs, always a very good thing.

.... an left for Nova Scotia .....and? minor typo (-2 points) Rivers ran like two way streets confounding fish and men...........i almost laughed here :) :) dance/ants......good one i, too, might have trouble making a better rhyme with oklahoma; what is oklahoma good for anyway! ? oh yeah, brian johnston's birthplace, i guess. added to MyPoemList. this is my kind of poem; meaning one i can appreciate better than many. thanks for sharing. bri :)

This strange dream let out the bag a humerus funny look at sweet lemons and birds driving mini coopers with mountains moving... clever fantasy poem indeed...regards

very entertaining, amazing words, I like it!

Lovely poem, its reminiscent of Dr. Seuss, just a tad less zany. This is definitely one for exercising your imagination lol. Love it~

This a great piece of poetry.I enjoyed reading it.

Totally love your gentle humor. Your poem has a rhythm all it's own. Great poem. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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