Tuesday, September 5, 2006

* I Feel Your Soul * Comments

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I did not know what you meant
When you said you feel my soul
What you saw of me was just a fragment
Thus to even know me was impossible
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Kay Barcelon
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Kelly Allen Vinal 06 September 2006

Such wonderful introspection, Kay. I loved this poem!

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William Jackson 05 September 2006

Thought provoking poem. Excellent write! The question is, 'Is he in touch with the real you or just a projection of his own mind? ' And yet, here is a projection of him invading your dreams. Perhaps he feels your soul after all.

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Kay Barcelon

Kay Barcelon

Manila Philippines
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