I Feel You Death Comments

death is inevitable. its proximity has always been a subject of poetic imagination. an ordinary person may say why one should ponder over it. but a poet has a conscience and hence... good poem, vaibhav

I love rhyme and you wrote this very well. The subject is an inevitable one that every poet confronts. Never stated better than you just did. GW62

Vaibav, a nice poem. your poems are wonderful, i really enjoy reading them and definitely they are worth reading and publishing..but you are too young to fear DEATH. enjoy your life to its fullest. practical life is hard and bitter. i hope you get everthing you wish for in life. take care

wish but I am unable to escape You do to my nerves a literal rape But why should I get away with you You fill me with sadder and wiser view. these lines touched me...., although the complete poem is beautiful, you vocab here is incredible... keep it up...