My soul is mellow
The hues of this eve sallow
And the old moon a queer
Shade of yellow.
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it is sad but isn't sadness a reality and sometimes bliss, , , , , , , , , loved reading it 10
Clever compostion. Enjoyed reading this... rather tongue in cheek but true nevertheless! HG: -) xx
PAINS EXPRESSED IN BFUL WORDS... I HOPE THEY DON'T REMAIN IN YOUR LIFE FOR A LONG TIME...
A nice composition. I love the following lines most- 'I shall not linger longer Than your patience Could persevere'
I shall not linger longer Than your patience Could persevere beautiful...
Love destined to die...mercy killing? No...The poem pictures the passivity of an inevitable ending of a stale relationship...an ending preferred and awaited mutually...an impressive write on the selected subject...10
So touchy that I really felt sad! 10+