Tuesday, October 7, 2008

`````i Feel Sad````` Comments

Rating: 3.3

My soul is mellow
The hues of this eve sallow
And the old moon a queer
Shade of yellow.
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wardha jawdat
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Ashraful Musaddeq 12 October 2008

So touchy that I really felt sad! 10+

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Reshma Ramesh 10 October 2008

oh wardha.............very nice

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Sadiqullah Khan 10 October 2008

it is sad but isn't sadness a reality and sometimes bliss, , , , , , , , , loved reading it 10

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Original Unknown Girl 09 October 2008

Clever compostion. Enjoyed reading this... rather tongue in cheek but true nevertheless! HG: -) xx

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 09 October 2008

PAINS EXPRESSED IN BFUL WORDS... I HOPE THEY DON'T REMAIN IN YOUR LIFE FOR A LONG TIME...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 08 October 2008

A nice composition. I love the following lines most- 'I shall not linger longer Than your patience Could persevere'

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Sarwar Chowdhury 08 October 2008

pain expressed beautifully! I am touched! ........10+

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I shall not linger longer Than your patience Could persevere beautiful...

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Kesav Easwaran 07 October 2008

Love destined to die...mercy killing? No...The poem pictures the passivity of an inevitable ending of a stale relationship...an ending preferred and awaited mutually...an impressive write on the selected subject...10

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