Sunday, May 19, 2019

I Feel My Cuts Comments

Rating: 5.0

They say I live in a fantasy
they say I need to see my doctor
they say I am troubled
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Zyw Zywa
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Chinedu Dike 06 June 2020

Well articulated and nicely brought forth with conviction. An insightful creation.

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Brook Renwick 06 June 2020

There is nothing wrong with taking medicine that elevates ones mood if this is troubling you? ? I do it and for this reason I am much happier. Amazing poem!

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Bharati Nayak 06 June 2020

Every body is unique and there is no need to conform to the standards set by others.If we try that we will always feel deficient and indulge in self loathing. It is good that you express your pains and bruises through a poem and you surely are a different person, unique and above mark.Congratulations for being selected as the Poet of the Day

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Ratnakar Mandlik 06 June 2020

An introspective soliloquy dipped in pain. A great poem. Congrats on poem of the day.

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 June 2020

all they say difference of me in defamatory statements but I am in another way yes dissimilarities there are an art being cut......

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Kevin Patrick 06 June 2020

Self loathing and alienation are two of the most painful feelings one deals with, that the knife feels like a release. Every human who cares and has compassion is a beautiful person. This is a painful read, because it is the tragedy of a cut soul that no band aid can fix. Good choice for poem of the day!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 January 2020

and still have the guts dare to say and to show that you don't feel well you compensate for that feeling with the cuts Beautiful but scary poem, I can't imagine that every time I feel something, I have to cut myself first. I have heard and read about other young girls, true eerie. For the second time have I read this excellent MPOTD that's why I comment again too.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 January 2020

scary story in this poem maybe everything is true that sense of being different be lesser not belonging to not being appreciated not comfortable in the skin

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Soran M. H 25 December 2019

thank you for sharing your great poem with us...10/10

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Jane Campion 07 July 2019

The pain cuts deeply in this sensitive poem.

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Jennifer Birchall 06 June 2019

I feel the pain in your words. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Congratulations on POD dear Zywa.

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 June 2019

Every human kind, every living being, every creation has different something …...//// superb poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 June 2019

Addition: A 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ for this amazing poem. The words cut through my inside. I am speechless, truly. Once again Thank you for sharing. God's Blessings in Abundance.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 06 June 2019

ONGRATULATIONS that you have been chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. Hurray! I'm really happy for you that you are chosen, Zywa Zywa. Is this poem written for Siera Mayhew or just as a Tribute for her? This is pure interest from me, you must know that. Excellent poem, aimed at a specific audience. Really a beautiful poem. TFS.

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Zywa Zywa 08 June 2019

Maybe you received a reply from me yesterday, but I think there was a failure with PoemHunter, so I'll give my answer once more. I wrote the poem for Siera, it is about her life. She writes poems about her life and her fantasies, but I had to express too the situation in which she is now. My poem is also a tribute to her and the way in which she keeps going. Dear Sylvia Frances, thanks for your interest.

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No, I did not receive your reply yesterday, just today the 8 June I had received this. I am very happy to read your precious reply. I guessed do, after having read your Poet´s Notes. Most important for the serious reader. You created this difficul matter so excellently, Zywa Zywa. Once again my great thanks. Truly loveliest Tribute for Siera. My two thumbs up for you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 06 June 2019

A well crafted poem of the day. Congrats, Zywa for being picked....10++++++++++++++

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Yet I am drowning. While waiting for help. It is arranged for next year. The general attitude of people has expressly been pictured. Congrats being POD

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 June 2019

They say i am different! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Matthew Holloway 06 June 2019

Congrats on poem of the day, a very interesting write on depression and self harm

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 June 2019

They say I lie to myself they say I am different than I feel, and I feel my cuts....... fine poem revealing the heart pain of criticism. tony

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