I Feel Like Im High Comments

I thought this poem was realy good but I don't like transitions that go from one mode to the other. I was really into the poem and then it seemed to change in the middle. I liked both, but I just couldn't give full credit. But the score is a good one because it does generate thought and discussion among readers. This is good and worthwhile. So the spirit of the poem has overwhelmed its shortcomings. Those of you at home, don't ever copy this form. GW62