Tuesday, December 16, 2008

'...I Feel Like I'Ve Been Robbed! ' Comments

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We've both made choices.
Not once did I question
Those you made.
I never compared your way of life...
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Kevin Patrick 22 May 2014

There's a great quote I love which goes We buy things we don't need, with money we don't have, to impress people we don't like, now I like people but I don't believe owning three hundred thousand products or keeping up with the Joneses makes me a better person then some, if people place more importance on having items or looking like extras from Dynasty then they are not people I have no regrets with not having relationships with. Knowledge is the only long term wealth. As always you stab to the heart good stuff.

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Valsa George 02 July 2012

How we look at life is more important than having a fat purse or other amenities in life. But if the loved one turns unfaithful, it is indeed heart rending....the hurt feeling is powerfully expressed... a nice poem! !

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The rabid reality of living. Powerful themes that are sometimes taken for granted. Well done my freind.

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Barry A. Lanier 12 February 2009

Yeah........you run out of money and you can count your friends on one hand........

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Naidz Ladia 25 December 2008

even if u dont hve nothing, even if u dont own big properties, dont worry..friends are more than anything..treasure the love from them, coz they are precious as gold..material things are just accessories in life.. i like ths poem lawrence, , its really happening nowadays.. naizz

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 December 2008

A well described person-qua-person poem. I would say Lawrence that every one has his/her own realities, own illusions and delusions and own justifications. A pennyless life is not as worse as the faithless is!

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