Monday, July 23, 2012

I Feel Like A River Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometime I feel like a river
Calm and peaceful going with the flows of life
Full of beautiful and mysterious things
Very complex waiting for discovery
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Kendra Tyler
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Dominic Hunt 16 August 2012

Using a river as a symbol is great, I have written a poem called the river. I understand what you are saying in this great work

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Walterrean Salley 01 August 2012

Sharp contrast. Using powerful imagery, with this poem- you have captured and vividly portrayed your extreme emotions very well. Quite a picture. Keep writing. Wish you the best.

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Kendra Tyler

Kendra Tyler

portland, oregon
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