Wednesday, July 20, 2011

I Feel Alone Comments

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I feel alone lost in my despair
Nobody to listen, to help guide one down the path
No matter what I try to do to make it better I still can't fight and the climb seems like the impossible
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Anne Jones
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Leke Adeleke 23 July 2011

Anne, i must say this is a beautiful piece.I could create a mental picture as i read along, nice.but the third line is too long, u could pass the message across in lesser words.pls read my 'Your Royal shyness' let me know how u feel about it.bye

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